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Posted: Oct 02, 2008 - 09:08 PM
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Ego Brain
Joined: Mar 08, 2007
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Location: Here rocking your socks off!
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Pain
Running trhu a path without an end
a music without rythm
Earing silent voices without knowing
someone is fallowing me...
I'm Singing a song forever to say
that you never walk in my way
always seeing your back
you just don't know my existance
Bombs are nothing to pay
This is nothing that we can gain
playing this song for you in vain
You just laugh and leave me away
without knowing my pain!
This doesn't make sence
all the time that I see that fence
closing my destiny for be a me and you
a we is something that will be not true
I'm Singing a song forever to say
that you never walk in my way
always seeing your back
you just don't know my existance
Bombs are nothing to pay
This is nothing that we can gain
playing this song for you in vain
You just laugh and leave me away
without knowing my pain!
My...My...Pain!
Killing isn't a right to defend!
But seeing war over and over again
This is nothing that we can gain
playing this song for you in vain
You just laugh and leave me away
without knowing my pain!
I'm Singing a song forever to say
that you never walk in my way
always seeing your back
you just don't know my existance
Bombs are nothing to pay
With death we have nithing to gain! |
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Posted: Oct 02, 2008 - 09:33 PM
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Ego Brain
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Mezmerize of this City
[V1]
Throw the flag
The flag of all hearts
The final hope
The blinded truth!
[CHORUS]
I'm walking form you
walking from me!
I don't want to see the Mezmerize of This City
[V2]
This is just a red sky with all the truth ,denial and lie
The truth will always be hidden untill they stop killing
All of them, armed soldiers with guns pointing
all of the blood that they are selling
Can't agreee with this theory
this is only the truth of their lies building up their govermante
creating Insanity all what is left of our destiny
The unexisting peace it's just flying with the peace of our world
the part that we have finish it!
You don't whant to see!
Is it me or is it you destroying this way!
[CHORUS 2]
I'm looking for you!
Your looking for me
I don't whant to see the Mezmerize of this City!
I'm walking form you
walking from me!
I don't wahnt to see the Mezmerize of This City!
[V3]
I was in my room, seeing from the window, the people holding their breaths
for all the soldiers all our familys
they has fear on their faces!
We don't whant to be in these places
with alot of fear, lot of danger!
On our woooooorld!
[CHORUS 3]
I'm walking form you
walking from me!
I don't wahnt to see the Mezmerize of This City!
I'm looking for you
Your looking for me
I don't whant to see the Mezmerize of this City!
[V4]
This city...this WORLD!
In this World there is fear!
There is war!
There is danger!
Mezmerize...
1...2...3...4...
I'm not walking the final line!
Just starting a new one!
In this world! In this world! Stay with me!
Just...stay with me...
This is a new version of a song that I writted two years ago  It's not easy to writte songs  |
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Posted: Oct 02, 2008 - 10:07 PM
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Needle
Joined: Mar 16, 2005
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This is to my song soldier, its a year old, i LOVE the chours
Verse 1: Another day gone by,
Whispering in the pain and sorrow you fill in me.
But I cant express the hate you make me feel
Walking on ward, are you dreaming?
Are you screaming?
Get away from me
Pre Chorus: And see, in all,
Do we go or do we stay up here this time?
Verse 2: My soul is closing in
Judging from my pain and sorrow I cannot heal.
But I feel that tomorrow is far away
Am I waking? Are you dreaming?
Are you screaming away? Get away from me
Pre Chorus: And see, in all
Do we go or do we stay up here this time?
You are leaving us behind
Chorus: We fight your wars
Inside, we reenlist our death to you
In life we are not free from you beheading all our faith
Am I to blame?
Verse 2 Reprise: My soul is closing in
Judging from my pain and sorrow you fill in me
Pre Chorus: And see, in all
Do we go or do we stay up here this time?
You are leaving us behind.
Chorus 2: We fight your wars
We reenlist our death to you
In life we are not free from you beheading all our faith
Am I to blame? |
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Posted: Oct 02, 2008 - 10:32 PM
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Ego Brain
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this song is better than the zombie one  did you created this? ANd what do you think about my songs? I just want to know what's your favourite song that I have written create more songs! They are great! |
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Posted: Oct 02, 2008 - 11:03 PM
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Needle
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yeah man urs are good, but it looks lik theres alot of soad lyrics in it
heres another, time enough at last, the music for it is here http://www.myspace.com/aarongage
Verse 1
Trying out all my ways
Seeing bound to survive
Im drowning out here
Pre
All the pain
No ones here
Here and far
No one seems to care
Left behind, here and now
Im counting on my right to live
Verse 2
All the pain
All the waitings insecure
Im counting on
Prechours
Chorus
Waiting, so much time its all i need
Guessing that it's time to carry one
Bridge
Chorus x2 |
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Posted: Oct 02, 2008 - 11:44 PM
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Ego Brain
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| And yours has a little os Scars on it it's our inspiration man. System are legends! But why do you think that my songs has alot of SOAD lyrics? Because of the word Mezmerize? plz tell me! |
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Posted: Oct 02, 2008 - 11:46 PM
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Cigaro
Joined: May 19, 2005
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Location: Northern Virginia
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You have some SOAD lyrics in your song Soldier too^ but I think that's natural for huge SOAD fans.
I'm sure SOAD/Daron/Serj take things from places too.
I like all of your guys creations by the way, SOAD influences or not 
This is really creative, by the way. I really like this:
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This state was never mine
State of never mind
This state was never mind
and this:
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This is just a red sky with all the truth ,denial and lie
The truth will always be hidden untill they stop killing
All of them, armed soldiers with guns pointing
all of the blood that they are selling
I like the selling blood part especially, I never would have thought of it that way. |
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Posted: Oct 02, 2008 - 11:51 PM
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Ego Brain
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SystemofaDownisHot wrote:
You have some SOAD lyrics in your song Soldier too^ but I think that's natural for huge SOAD fans.
I'm sure SOAD/Daron/Serj take things from places too.
I like all of your guys creations by the way, SOAD influences or not
Thanx! you can writte your own too this topic is for everyone post their songs! What's your favourite song by far? |
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Posted: Oct 02, 2008 - 11:53 PM
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Cigaro
Joined: Oct 17, 2006
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Location: shootin up your world
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My friend wrote this.
in the fires of a far off land
in the cold fields was a stricken man
in the rude bedding he was forced to lay
rob and steal to make it through the day
is it wrong to make a living?
taking all and never giving?
theft seemed like it was the only source
petty crimes it started out at first
soon it turned into a way of life
his soul was frought with violence and strife
is it wrong to make a living?
taking all and never giving?
to confront him came the scourge of god
stench of corruption telling of his fall
to his soul this demon was his bane
filled with rage and everlasting pain!
it isn't wrong to make a living
i'm always taking, never giving
the demon snarled and raised his blade
but no power would this man obey
back to father satan this fiend was sent
the man collapsed- his energy spent
it isn't wrong to make a living
i'm always taking baby, never giving |
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Posted: Oct 02, 2008 - 11:54 PM
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Cigaro
Joined: May 19, 2005
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Location: Northern Virginia
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I'm not sure I have a favorite o_O
lol it's just like with SOAD I like everything haha..... I have trouble making decisions!
I try to write my own songs but I personally think they suck :/
And I can never finish a song. I'll start it but get half way done and get writer's block...
Edit: ooo I really like the song above me too^ |
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Posted: Oct 03, 2008 - 12:00 AM
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Ego Brain
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| hackthesystem2, your firend's song is really answome! I personaly like Insane. It's a song that I created. I have the lyrics written in the page before. sdsj, I know that you already have a band and all, I writte songs for like 2 years and I got to say, your lyrics are answome but you right really small songs. you just have like two verses and two chorus. Keep up trying to make a great song |
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