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Posted: Sep 29, 2008 - 08:09 PM
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Ego Brain
Joined: Mar 08, 2007
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Location: Here rocking your socks off!
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Ok, for all the musicions in this site, I've made this to writte down youre lyrics from a song that you created. What fo you think about this?
Untitled
[V1]
Every time that I've seen earth's fall I just cry
Cry without a try of saving me
Goodbye!
Are we gonna die?!
[CHORUS]
When you grave my hand I see that peaceful land!
A Land That I can stand
We are in a Battle Field
Just come with me and say what you feel
Let's finish this! It's all in our hands!
[CHORUS 2]
Just come with me
Run away from this deathly way
Agree or not this isn't the last bomb that we are going to see todaay!
Trust me in this deadly wish!
We are not saaaaaafe!
Just run awaaaaaaaaaaaaay!
[V2]
Goo away! Left it all! The earth is going to have a hell of a fall
When we see all of our love flying away!
Coooooooooome with meeeeeeeee! With meeeeeeeeeeeeee!
I need you...
ohhh...
I need you...
I need! Youuuuuuuuu!
[CHORUS]
When you grave my hand I see that peaceful land!
A Land That I can stand
We are in a Battle Field
Just come with me and say what you feel
Let's finish this! It's all in our hands!
[CHORUS 2]
Just come with me
Run away from this deathly way
Agree or not this isn't the last bomb that we are going to see today
Trust me in this deadly wish!
We are not saaaaafe!
Just run awaaaaaaaaaaaaay!
From me...
Truuuuust me! Truuuuuuuuuust meeeeee!
I still don't have a name for this song  I will work on it. What do you think? post your lyrics! i'm curious to see how is your imagination for songs  |
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Posted: Sep 30, 2008 - 03:53 PM
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Location: UK
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Posted: Sep 30, 2008 - 07:13 PM
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Spider
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The rhyming isn't that bad.
But please explain what it's about. |
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Posted: Sep 30, 2008 - 07:39 PM
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Ego Brain
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Location: Here rocking your socks off!
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| well...war...love things like that I can't writte random songs |
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Posted: Sep 30, 2008 - 08:00 PM
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Ego Brain
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| sorry for the double post, I just want to ask if someone can writte down their lyrics of your created song? |
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Posted: Sep 30, 2008 - 08:05 PM
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Posted: Sep 30, 2008 - 08:25 PM
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Spider
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| It might sound better if we heard it with an instrument. |
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Posted: Sep 30, 2008 - 10:27 PM
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Cigaro
Joined: Feb 03, 2005
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| I wouldn't post stuff your lyrics on here.. just my opinion. How long did it take you to write those lyrics out? |
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Posted: Oct 01, 2008 - 09:34 PM
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Ego Brain
Joined: Mar 08, 2007
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Insane (Single)
Drive in the line that you will cross
all I can see can go away
before we can save our selves
and say that your self mixed up
your just an idiot trying to prove something...
Just do what you want me to do
just think about you driving me insane
Run Run Run before they kill you
this world is on war
we have to survive
open your eyes and see that your self mixed up
your just an idiot trying to prove something...
Just do what you want me to do
just think about you driving me insane!
Just di what you whant me to do
This isn't a stupid fu**ing game!
(Solo)
This is not a stupid gaaaaame!
This is our chance to save us
We have to save our land
Just don't happen another two thousand!
All the idiotic midia can't see that they are self mixed up
Just blow them off with a bomb from the U.S.
Just do what you want me to do
just think about you driving me insane
Just do what you want me to do
just think about you driving me insane!
Insane!
Insane!
Inaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaane!
Driving me Insane!...
I have a demo from this song. The instruments are fromm a site so I changed the lyrics to change the instruments too. Of course that me and my band aren't going to play songs from a site lol.
http://br.youtube.com/watch?v=1_CdJDNCEls |
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Posted: Oct 02, 2008 - 07:34 PM
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Bliss (recording in studio next week)
Verse 1
When im in this state of mind
All existance seems border line
All aboard the whirly train
Just suppressants for all your pain
Pre Chours
Wondering the streets finding
No one around has come
To the conclusion
The people have fallen
Verse 2
Zombies walking through the door
Licking sediments off the floor
Boarded windows wont prevent
Consummating the sediment
Pre Chrous
Chorus
And crying
Without you Im crying
Bridge
This state was never mine
State of never mind
This state was never mind
Chours x2
this is about a drug from a captain planet episode and the drug is called Bliss, bsically it works lik poeple turning into zombies. |
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Posted: Oct 02, 2008 - 08:24 PM
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Ego Brain
Joined: Mar 08, 2007
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| lol. The first verse is really answome! |
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