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Posted: Jul 26, 2008 - 09:49 PM
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Spider
Joined: Oct 16, 2006
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Location: Warwickshire, England
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xD hehe great! You always have a way of placing a smile on my face, especially when you write stuff like this. ^^
Great job, Ely. Keep it up. The people demand more more more! |
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Posted: Jul 26, 2008 - 09:49 PM
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Lost in Hollywood
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Location: In a van down by the river!!!
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Posted: Jul 26, 2008 - 10:25 PM
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Dart
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Location: Their Hearts.Their Minds.My World.
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I hope you will like her even more in the enxt chapters...
and lol, Nik, i didn't think about this connection..you and serj are connected, no way out!
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Posted: Jul 26, 2008 - 10:33 PM
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Lost in Hollywood
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^^Indeed! 
I've only once heard him say my name. Some girl on the radio was named Nicole, anyway when he said I got chills.  |
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Posted: Sep 11, 2008 - 01:41 PM
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Dart
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Posted: Sep 11, 2008 - 08:25 PM
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Dart
Joined: Sep 06, 2007
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Oh my gosh.
Thanks to the accident of today, i lost the 5th and 6th chapter of my story, because, unfortunately, today i changed my computer, and i don't find these chapters.
I hope to be able to find them. |
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Posted: Nov 18, 2008 - 05:40 PM
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Dart
Joined: Sep 06, 2007
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Ok, it has been 2 months that i haven't worked on this.
i don't know if somebody remembers this...if soembody does, and wants to read how the story goes...
I will write very slowly, thanks to school and things i ahve to do..but I still hope soembody would look at this and have fun.
Here is a little resume of chapter 6, lost in the crash.
Daron was being an ass to Nicole, he wanted serj all for him, thanks to the relationship they shared in their early years.Nicole doesn't want to obey daron, so she enters the studio..
CHAPTER 7
I opened the door, without taking care or daron's evil look behind my shoulder.
Serj smiled, and welcomed me with a bear hug.
"Nik, here are the guys...Shavo and John."
John didn't even look at my eyes, but directly at my boobies, when he shook my hand.
Shavo's behaviour was...well..weird.
He came next to me, his beard tickling my arm, and hugged me as if he had known me for ages.
I looked at him, and he came near my hear, and whispered there:
"I know daron won't help you...I am gonna do this.I'm with you."
I didn't really understand what he meant.
I looked around myself:the room was incredibly amazing.
guitars were hung on the wall, John's white drumset was there, abandoned in a corner, shavo was holdign a thunderbird and in the other hand a cigarette.
There was this black, amazing keyboard, that I had the urge to try.
i ran there, and i played the first notes of "Let It Be"
serj kept on smiling, and kindly asked me tos top playing...he wanted the guys to ehar my song.
i was not so sure about this, expecially when daron looked at me with these brown eyes...and made me regreat the kick in the schnibbel i ahd given him before.
I had no idea.
No idea at all.
I didn't know what would ahve happened that afteroon.
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Serj was playing the guitar, nicole was singing.
The other 3 guys were looking at this weird couple.
nicole was beautiful, she really was...but system was good without her.
at least, this was daron's thought.
He was thinking about lots of things, he felt so hurted, in his heart and his cock.
the kick she gave himw as quiet powerful, as powerful as his feelign for serj.
He never forgot him as a lover, even though he was one of his best friends.
Daron felt almost everyday the feeling fo serj's kisses...but everyhtign was over.
"Nevermind.the only thing i want to stop is the feeling serj has for her."he thought, lighting a joint.
"Daron?Daron?are you still with us?"screamed Serj in his ear, waving his hand in front of him.
"Yeah, sure."
"What do you think about the song, man?"asked serj, begging with his eyes for a good answer.
Daron felt in multiple ways,but he understood he had just one way to express how he was feeling.
"This is shit man.The album is not ready for this.Work on the lyrics.The music is good.But I never heard such a shit in all my life."
His heart was bouncing from happiness.
Nicole was ready to cry, and he felt fo filled with that, that he could ahve jumped of happiness.
Shavo looked at him in the worse way ever, and took away Nicole, pretending to show her John's drumset, and John followed them.
"So?"
"So what, serj?You know i don't like her way to write."replied Daron, sititng on the couch.
Serj stroked his shoulder.
"Man, Nicole is sensitive.You should have said this with calm in the enxt recording session."
daron stood up, with an anger he never again agaisnt serj.
"I don't want her fucking stripper body in here man!She is a distraction, for you, for em, for everybody!John keeps staring at ehr boobs, c'mon!"
"You say this because she is better than you at writing songs!"screamed serj, shutign up just after that, undrstanding what he said.
Daron's eyes got filled with tears.
"You..I...I never thought u were such an ass, serj.I saw the way you look at her.I saw it.She will be mine, ass.I'll oblige her to be mine."repleid Daron, runnign away.
Nicole came there, and looked at serj.
"Maybe you should have not said this."
"I know...It's better if i go to talk with him."
"No way" said Nicole, "i'd go.I have to explain him in am not here to steal his palce in the band."
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I found Daron closed in the bathroom, crying like a baby.
"dar.."
"You whore!Go away!"
I sighed.It's so hard to cope with rockstars.
"I don't want to steal your palce, man..You know, I don't like serj..well...not as u think I like him. I...!"
I had really no time to understand what happened,but Daron jumped at my lips and kissed me, tryign to undress me.
"NO!"
Daron ahd an evil smile.
"Blow me, whore!"
I screamed,,hoping somebody could hear me.
He took my neck, as if he wanted to strangle me.
"Blow me now.Serj doesn't deserve these sweet lips."he said, pullign down his trousers, and tryign to pull me near his..."cock".
I wish I never did that, that i never put my mouth around it, and done that making him cum, I wish I never obeid to that order..becuase it was thanks to that violence, that I understood what was rigth to do.
hope u like it..it's nothing special..but.. |
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Posted: Nov 18, 2008 - 05:47 PM
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Marmalade
Joined: Dec 19, 2007
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O.O wow. Really. Wow.
AWESOME  Im so glad you continued writing this one 
And Daron is a bad jealous asshole, but Im sure he will get soemthing for it later on, right?  |
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Posted: Nov 18, 2008 - 05:55 PM
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Spider
Joined: Oct 16, 2006
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Location: Warwickshire, England
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Erm...
xD Daron!! You bad man.
You are going to make nicole bite off schnibbel, I hope.
Cool chapter by the way. ^_^ I'm glad you're writing again. |
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°° She's The Right Eye °°
°° She's The Left Pika Luver °°
I <3 you..
Thanks for the signature, darling <3 (made by Lady_Dolmayan_90)
For the benefit of Mr. Kite..
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Posted: Nov 18, 2008 - 06:14 PM
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Dart
Joined: Dec 08, 2007
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the kick in the Schnibbel
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And Daron is a bad jealous asshole, but I'm sure he will get something for it later on, right?
Like, uhm, now? someone seems to have put a spell on him 
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John didn't even look at my eyes, but directly at my boobies, when he shook my hand
Great chapter Ely! Too bad we lost chapter 6, my favorite one (and you know why)^^ |
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Posted: Nov 18, 2008 - 10:36 PM
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Spider
Joined: Jan 14, 2008
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Location: Being kicked out of my mind...
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| O_O Daron that evil little! But he's soo innocent! D: That was awesome! |
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