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Posted: Jun 10, 2006 - 10:23 PM
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Please consider that this is the first time I write something in English. I know that in hungarian it's much better.
But I'm curious what do you think of such a story like mine, so I post the first chapter, which is quite short. But feel free to comment.
Chapter 1
"Morganna...Let your name be Morganna from this day. Welcome to the Camarilla Clan." - these words are echoing in my head with an evil, creepy laughter.
And it is going on like this every time I'm dreaming for a long time now.
But this time as those words reached me, the dream was over and I woke up.
I went to the window and looked outside through the shades. I noticed that the sun went down."So my time has come. It's safe outside." - I thought to myself.
The I looked around in the messy room: CD-s, clothes every where...
Well, some things never change. Even if you transfer into new, deep in your soul you keep a few features from your past. But the old me has gone, she died on the night when Morganna was born.
I turned away from the window and started to listen to the room's silence. My glance slipped to the bed, where a body lied mutely and still.
But this body wasn't ordinary, because I believed that it's presence would change my existence.
This was the body of D., the only true love of my previous life - which now was waiting for the awakening.
- Just sleep, we have time - I thought and lit a cigarette.
Then suddenly a question came to my mind: Was my creator waiting for me like this?
We never talked about it, but I guessed that the answer would be no. He was led by different reasons than me. He saw the chance in me and he had the desire for teaching me. He wanted to be my master. He - at least in the beginning - was led by this strange desire, but not love.
My actions were redeemed only by instinct. But on that special day it changed: the time has come to use my new found knowledge and abilities to make my secret and hidden dream come true.
So I was just sitting and waiting for my creature to come alive. |
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Posted: Jun 10, 2006 - 11:11 PM
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Peephole
Joined: Mar 15, 2006
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Location: Croatia
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| i liked this! more! more! |
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Spank-age  ---> good old times!
scalare i love you so much! *kisses*
my beloved sister, Pearl 
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Posted: Jun 11, 2006 - 04:35 PM
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Thank you!  I'm glad you liked. I started to translate the second chapter. |
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Denial is killing them twice ... 04/24/1915
(O.o) Copy and paste Bunny into
(> <) your signature to help him gain world domination.
My friends:Sweet_Statue, Psycho_Shadow, metaliger, bart_psycho, spicymeatball, Nelekeuh,danielpsoad-09, darontotallyrocks,Donteathefish, shavosofficiallover, kennethsa91
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Posted: Jun 11, 2006 - 10:57 PM
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i will read it when it is finished 
i know how hard is to say what you feel and what you want to say in english.  |
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thanks e-ray for my great sig!
Spank-age ---> good old times!
scalare i love you so much! *kisses*
my beloved sister, Pearl
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Posted: Jun 13, 2006 - 08:10 AM
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Chapter 2
My rebirth was a movement of my life I consider a bless when I look back. In contrast to the others, my becoming a vampire has turned my „life” into the right direction. I’ve gained a new personality that didn’t kill my goals and desires but helped to achieve them with my new abilities.
If I compare my human existence any my life as a vampire I find that the biggest difference is that now I’m much more stronger and self-confident than before. I love this, because the help of Serge – my sire – I could win over my fears and doubts.
I remember perfectly the night we met.
As every summer that year I went to a festival with my friends for the good concerts and for having fun.
One night I was sitting and smoking cigarettes in front of my tent when I noticed that somebody was watching me from the darkness.
I wasn’t scared then because I didn’t feel any danger. I only felt curiosity: Who is watching me? And why me? By the time I smoked my cigarette the truth came to light.
A tall guy in black dress with long hair slowly walked to me. He asked me in a misterious tone:
- Hello! Could you give me light?
As I looked into his face by the light of my Zippo, I got under the control of mixed feelings: I was scared but I couldn’t escape from his power. I was trapped by the glamour of his eyes.
He didn’t say a word just sat next to me and smoked his cigarette.
Then he slowly turned to me and kissed me gently. First on my lips, then he went to my neck..
My body started to shake. I told to myself that I should stop him, when suddenly I felt a bite.
„Holy shit! This is a vampire!” – this thought ran through my brain.
But then everything became dark as I felt the life streaming out of my body …
…I don’t know how much time has passed when in an unbelievable way I was conscious again. I felt as I was sleeping for at least 1000 years.
I opened my eyes and I was shocked to see that I am in a darkened room together with the guy who I met before my tent.
At first I didn’t understand what was happening. Then as the mist was starting to disperse in my head suddenly I remembered: he’s a vampire!
I wanted to run away screaming but I couldn’t move and there wasn’t a single voice coming out of my mouth.
He softly held me with his arms and started speaking:
- Calm down, everything will be perfect now that I have you by my side. Please listen to me.
Call me Serge. As you know I’m a vampire and your sire. Yes, you’ve been transferred.
- So am I dead now? – I knew that it was a stupid question but what was I supposed to say?
- Yes, Morganna…
- Wait! I don’t get it! My name is…
- Forget! – he said on a sharp voice – She has gone. You are Morganna now. – and he started to laugh on that creepy but somehow attractive voice… |
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Denial is killing them twice ... 04/24/1915
(O.o) Copy and paste Bunny into
(> <) your signature to help him gain world domination.
My friends:Sweet_Statue, Psycho_Shadow, metaliger, bart_psycho, spicymeatball, Nelekeuh,danielpsoad-09, darontotallyrocks,Donteathefish, shavosofficiallover, kennethsa91
If you want to be my friend too, PM me;)
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Posted: Jun 13, 2006 - 05:42 PM
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Peephole
Joined: Mar 15, 2006
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Location: Croatia
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| wow... i didn't expect a vampire! i like this very much (is there chapter 3? ) |
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thanks e-ray for my great sig!
Spank-age ---> good old times!
scalare i love you so much! *kisses*
my beloved sister, Pearl
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Posted: Jun 14, 2006 - 08:59 PM
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Thank you my only reader
I'll continue after my holiday... |
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Denial is killing them twice ... 04/24/1915
(O.o) Copy and paste Bunny into
(> <) your signature to help him gain world domination.
My friends:Sweet_Statue, Psycho_Shadow, metaliger, bart_psycho, spicymeatball, Nelekeuh,danielpsoad-09, darontotallyrocks,Donteathefish, shavosofficiallover, kennethsa91
If you want to be my friend too, PM me;)
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Posted: Jun 15, 2006 - 11:06 PM
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Joined: Mar 15, 2006
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| i think i'm not only reader.... ok... i will wait for new chapter! |
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thanks e-ray for my great sig!
Spank-age ---> good old times!
scalare i love you so much! *kisses*
my beloved sister, Pearl
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Posted: Jun 16, 2006 - 02:42 AM
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Location: You can see me watching the world before me pass me by.
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Uhh i'm another reader... Please i will wait till your return..Lol  |
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Fuck you for you loving me.
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Posted: Jun 16, 2006 - 02:44 AM
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Until you return...
Wait this was like months ago...
Is she still coming back? |
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Fuck you for you loving me.
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Posted: Jun 26, 2006 - 09:45 AM
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| I was in Italy on holiday, but I'll continue it very soon |
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Denial is killing them twice ... 04/24/1915
(O.o) Copy and paste Bunny into
(> <) your signature to help him gain world domination.
My friends:Sweet_Statue, Psycho_Shadow, metaliger, bart_psycho, spicymeatball, Nelekeuh,danielpsoad-09, darontotallyrocks,Donteathefish, shavosofficiallover, kennethsa91
If you want to be my friend too, PM me;)
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